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Oi!

Haha! Long time no see!

First I'd like to say that you're getting a lot better with piano in your melodies. The one in here was.. :)))). You did awesome man.

Your melodies are good as usual but you seem to be lacking still. It feels a bit bland. Like you have all this space in your song that you could fill.

Your beat is good though, your beats usually are..

I wouldn't really call it hard dance.

But dance none the less.

A nice basis here. :)

Intro..

Was really nice. It most definitely grabbed my attention.
But when you brought in the beat, it went off beat. And that kind of threw me off.

And later on in the song, I don't know if you have distortion on the guitar or what but it sounds quite raspy to the point that it becomes a bit aggravating. Maybe tune that?

But otherwise, the bass, is great, and the melody you chose is honestly, sorrowful and heart felt.

Nice job. :)

Nice..

Very tranquil and it does leave this kind of air around you, or me at least, of reminiscing.

I really liked this, sorry I don't have much to say but..

I think, it lacks enough to fit it's description, but contains enough to grant you the overall feeling.

Favs. :)

Cybaaaaaish?

Very interesting.

It gives me this feel of a cybernetic ancient china.

Heh.. Is cybernetic a word?

It's cool.

It sounds congested but you really have all the effects and movements and to me it sounds great. I love the synths at around 00:12, they sound great.

I love this. When the full comes out, or if you ever do more, pm me. I would love to listen. :)

kjhsdgf responds:

Thanks for the review!
and yes, cybernetic is a word.. i think.
i think i need better mastering on this, but that will come out with the final version.
but, yeah, i'll pm you when the for rizzeal version comes out.
again, thanks for the review!

Lmao..

I don't know why I like this, it's just so funny and random.

It would have been awesome if you had a killer melody come out near the end.

You know..

To show how much you like pie.

Favorited anyway. This is awesome. lol

Interesting..

You have a great basis and it sounds intruiging. I'm just wondering where you'll take it.

Haha, when you've finished it PM me, I'd love to review it. It'll be better than this I'm sure.

DomesticTerrorist responds:

Sure thing, thanks for the review!

Lol, nice.

Do one of FFX. :)

That'd be pretty f'in sweet.

OH wow..

The strings are great.

The drums, in my opinion, ruins it.

A beat would work, just not that one.

This would be great ambient..wow. <3

Some piano would be nice. I would love to just melt this thing with nice piano progressions.

Good job though with the strings. :DD

VNStudios responds:

Thanks man. I took out the drums and now it's more of an ambient classical song.

Interesting..

But what is it supposed to be?

This would be a cool intro. (Not the whole thing put probably the first 12-14 seconds)

I don't really have much to say but it's interesting enough. Good job. ;)

God, I love this song..

Ok, the intro is great, <3333

But the synth that comes in at 00:28 is too overbearing. That needs to be tuned down.

The bass was alright, I wish it would have gone in a different direction, pitch-wise.

At 1:49. it would be cool if you let that melody play out for two counts, then fade in with another synth playing the melody that progressed throughout the rest of the song, and instead of bringing back in the robotic high pitch sounds, you faded back in the melody from the beginning.

I don't know, just suggests, but the beginning of this song is..WTF, AWESOME!

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