Ah!!!
Grrr!!!
Ok, so the strings came in and my curiosity was peaked.
Then at 00:20 you brought in the melody..
AH! It fits and then it doesn't fit.
I was listening intently trying to get that lacquered feeling I get whenever you hear a melody practically rest in the arms of what's accompanying it (i.e. the strings).
I figured that you had it that way and that later another melody would help fill in the gaps.
It didn't but that's alright.
That, in my opinion, was the only thing holding this piece.
Because it's a great song!
Your beats, I've noticed, are always great.
I could learn from you, since my beats never seem to come out right.
Keep up the good work!
:)