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Dewwdd.

This would be sick if you could get some real guitar in there.

And I understand where you're coming from.

I LOVE metal but craving for a nice slick hip hop beat is etched in my being.

This isn't bad, the guitar is a bit raspy and staticy.

But I get the gist of it.

Ritz190 responds:

that is real guitar...O_O wow...(awkward)
but yea it needs work..and work shall be done...thanks for teh review!

Ah. .. .>.<

Me personally, I'm not a fan of this kind of trance.

The beginning was.. <3333.. nice and smooth build up with jaw dropping chords.

I heard the bass and was like.. OH YEAH.

And when the synth came in, followed by the quick snare I knew what was about to come.

But I'm not going to bash. This song is good!

It's going to be really good.

I'd love to hear the finished product.

The voice?

<333

Gorgeous.

It sends out this sinister (maybe not sinister but darkly sensual) vibe that I'm seriously loving.

I was hoping their would have been a bit more melody but this is fine as is.

I could bob my head on end to this.

Niceness.

NKAT responds:

Ty for the review man. I did check out Jamglue.com or Looperman.com and picked up some free acapellas for that darkly sensual chick singing. I'm 75% proud of this. Ty again dude.

Oi!

first I'd have to say that your piano has inspired me to make a song. :))

Second, this has the makings of an awesome composition.

My biggest thing would have to be the bass. At certain parts it seems to fall off beat a tad. And sometimes sounds a little out of it. But it matches up really well. :)

Oh man.

I really like this.

favorites pl0x.

sailingships responds:

thanks! and yeah, i agree with the bass, im not sure why it does that though... ill have to go back and give it a look over once more...

i just wish i had knew more about music, haha.

00;45. :)))

I LOVE the ascending in the part.

Ah man!

This is a really nice song! Most definitely one that could be featured in a videogame.
(something adventerous like sonic)

I would have to say this was 5 minutes of my life well spent.

GameBalance responds:

thanks. Hm. It's not action enough for Sonic but not a puzzle game also.

Oi!

The pads! They're too muffeled! (it seems)

I would say spread them out to make them fill up empty space.

I don't know how much panning you did (besides the maraca shaky thingy)

But I think if it were panned a bit better the song would feel much fuller.

This is great mood music. :)

Keep it up!

Cool.

I love the melody!

My only problem is that I wish you had a higher voice that held the melody in a bit more stable rythym, besides the bass.

I would love to hear the melody echoing within the spaces of my headphones carried by light bells or soft synth or maybe faint piano.

But this is an awesome tune man!

I like it! Great job. :)

mattuiop responds:

Thanks Man :D
Its sounds WAY better when you put this tune in surround sound! :P

Kk.

It sounds crucial indeed.

I'm guessing you were going for an off-beat unaware feel?

The synth you use throughout, (the one that is the loudest) is a bit too abrupt. Maybe let it hold out a bit before cutting it off?

Or perhaps finding a synth that eases itself into the setting instead of accenting every beat it starts on.

Not bad, this would be pretty good sfx music.

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

Cool dude thanx for the review, I'm just getting into production, so everything I can get will help

I like it man.

It's really chill and laid back.

The most disturbing part is the part at about 1:09, that shrill pad or synth in the background.

It's highly annoying.

The song also gets a tad repetitive. (would this be a song rapped to?)
Because if not, it would have been great to throw in a moving bass at around the 3 mark, or perhaps a key change, or a counter-melody that gave the melody a bit more depth.

But besides that, everything flows great and I'm loving how the rhythm just lays to rest in my eardrums.

Niceness. :)

Pgtblink responds:

Yea It's meant to have vocals on it.. but thanks man i was thinking the same thing with the bass until i get someone to lay some vox

Arpeggiated Piano?

Amazing touch.

And I really liked the way you handled the slayer.

Kept it under control (which many people can't seem to handle)

and touched it up QUITE nice.

I know hip hop beats aren't really taken notice of on newgrounds but I'm starting to open up.

At 2:24, it's nice but I wish you would have taken the voices into a different direction instead of keeping them on the same down beat as the guitar. There was a changed but the repeated rythmic pattern didn't refresh the song as much as I would have hoped.

Besides that one part..

This is seriously sick stuff man.

I'm really going to have to check out your other creations. :)

Keep it up!

2one9 responds:

y thank you good sir, and maybe just cuz u were so cool about it, ill change the choirs a lil bit haha. thanks

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