Hm...
It's nice.
The intro melody is VERY interestibng, kept me listening in.
One thing I didn't like too much was the instrument the came in at around 00:41ish
I don't know if it was because it overpowered the melody at certain times, or I just didn't like how it sounded.
Otherwise, very creative!
Nice job!
The song starts so suddenly.
I like it alot though.
Wish it was longer.
Not much to say, other than good job.
Hm...
This makes me think of a forest or beach scene in a movie.
Warm and serene.
Pads...^.^
This allows a person to express multiple feelings.
Happiness, sadness, hope...
Very moving.
Proceed, Proceed =D.
And oh yeah, the pads do end kind of abruptly, but I had to listen a second time to notice it XD.
Fading would be nice. For the pads I mean.
Thanks again for the comments here. I'm currently looking into changing them to fading out. Hopefully they aren't too abrupt at the beginning but I'll see if I can ease them in a bit. Glad you enjoyed!
~SinJim
Wow man...
This is awesome.
I could seriously see this on a RPG game.
The vocals weren't bad, I jus twish yo ucould change the pitch at which she sun at certain parts.
Anyway...
Loved the beat, and the pad was great.
Not too loud, not too soft, just perfecto!
And THEN I heard the piano...<3 <3
Great, no...AMAZING job man.
Another favorited song by you?
I don't think that's the only thing I'll be favoriting..
Keep it up man! You have talent! Seriously!
Thanks for the comments, I'll look into changing up the pitch of her voice, it'd definitely give it some variation. I'm glad you enjoyed this one!
~SinJim
Nice...
Its weird...
But it flows so nicely.
I honestly don't know what to say other than...
Favorites!
So much potential...
I just need the beat!!
Hard kicks man!
If you ever work on the beat of this song, PM me, I would love to hear it!
It's gonna be good!
Very very pretty...
Did you play this by hand?
It's beautiful.
I would love to hear the version with the girl singing on it.
But I'm more of an instrumental buff, so I'd probably take the demo without the voice.
If you ask me, the beat you have right now is just fine.
It's smooth, and it flows real well.
It makes the piece perfect.
On the favorites...
Thank you for the kind comments. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. I played most of it by hand and went back to adjust stuff I missed. The one with the girl singing in it was good, I dunno it just didn't fit right. PM me and I can send it to you (it was a previous version with different drums). Anyways thanks!
~SinJim
The solo guitar...
Doesn't really sound all that great in my opinion.
IN the beginning, the solo completely messed up the awesome chords that were being played.
That was actually the only thing I didn't like about it.
It kind of ruined the song for me.
Is there a version of this without the solo?
If so can you tell me?
Fail, dude.
Check the auther comments before review kthx.
The opening melody...
Is a tad loud.
That and the synth.
Otherwise, nice work with this!
Keep at it!
yea, i didn't take too long to do this, if only i had worked at it a little more. and i still got problems with "too loud or too low" instruments...
but thanks anyway ^^
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