Ooooooh
It sounds pretty good on it' s way in, except for the one synth that sounds like it fades in and out that is a bit off beat.
Certain parts sound crammed, like at around 01:14 ish.
My only problem is that there are parts that sound crammed throughout the song similar to what you hear at around 1:14.
But otherwise, this is a sweet song.
thanks
:D
Ouch...
It sounds great till about 00:41 when you add another synth.
I like the rythm you had going, but the layered synths were a bit gut-wrenching.
Especially near the end.
I have a feeling you meant for it to be off-beat at the end.
Or maybe not but...
Not bad.
Oh!
Man, this is so freaking awesome.
It started off sounding like an young, innocent version of the song.
And then you brought in the beat, which was real nice.
Dude, favoirted!
I really liked this!
Smooth...
In the beginning, you have that one note that stands out because it's loud.
The flow to this is real nice, very chill.
I had only wished that you would have had like a break in the song which easily led back into the original melody.
But this is nice.
I like!
Amazing!
The only thing I had a slight problem with was the guitar part that came in at around around 00:47 ish.
It was just some of the notes that you used that kind of made me lose a bit of the tranquil feel that you were going for.
It's not a bad rythm, oh no, just some of the notes.
But other than that, amazing piece.
Favorited.
I know exactly what you mean. I came up with an idea while working on the orignal piece and so I've changed the tone slightly. I think it works better with the whole arrangement now...
Weird...
I was nodding my head to this and didn't even realize it.
This is just smooth all around.
It would make good flash music too.
Nice work m8!
Dude!
This is great!
I know what you mean about the presets.
If you don't mind, I would love it if you would send me the fl files. Go to my page and you'll find my email address.
This is really good for your first time man.
Keep it up!
Yo, not bad.
It sounded empt though.
There were parts when I thought it was getting good, which was when the piano and the bass ( or whatever it is) started playing together.
I was hoping you would go somewhere with the bass and the piano.
You did not, but still, not bad man.
Not bad at all
This is awesome...
If you EVER make this into a full-fledged song, PM me, I wanna hear it.
There is so much movement in this song, but it all flows together SO well.
Great Job Man!!
Would have downloaded but it's too short XD.
Yet I have no problem favoritng.
will do
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