Ok..confused...XF
Like, I understand that it is supposed to sound weird because there is supposed to be an error, but...
I thought it could have sound a bit better.
The ending part, I agree with the guy below me, was probably the best part, and it IS really good, I'm not trying to sell you short or anything.
Maybe you should try another way to build up to the final sound. It's not bad, it just needs a bit of work.
other than that...
I have a feeling your cd is going to be pretty darn good.
^.~