Wow...
This was really good. I would have loved to see what you could have made if you hadn't gone brain dead. But you know what...
I think it's perfect the way it is.
Wow...
This was really good. I would have loved to see what you could have made if you hadn't gone brain dead. But you know what...
I think it's perfect the way it is.
wow, thanks =)
As usual...
Very good.
The pads in the middle were very loud though...=/, at 00:53, and so was everything after that.
Even though you wanted it to be trance, it doesn't have to be so loud. Other than that though, it's good.
^.~
Yeah I realized that once I listened to it again. I made a 2nd version that is a little softer and sounds a lot smoother - I can send it to you if you want.
Aw Poo!!
I was going to make this song, but all I was able to make was Thunder Plains...=(
This was really good! Good job!
^.~
It has its quirks...but I do agree that it is decent.
Thanks though :), a review is always appreciated...how much depends on the review though ^^.
-AJ-
10/10 to :D
Lol...
I'm seeing Chocobos with Afros and flare pants!
This was great...and I should know, since I'm a crazy FF fan.
Whoot!
lol^^ and what about breakdancing fat-chocobo, huh ? :D
thanks for the review man, I'm glad you liked it !
Well...
It sounds good to me, especially at 1:37...
but at 1:37, it would sound so much better if it wasn't so load and overbearing. That should be a real soft and gentlepart.
Near the end, the melodies are good, but it sounds like you're trying to give them all a significant amount of volume so you can hear everything, and it makes it sound clashed. Very badly.
I would suggest make everything a bit softer, especially at 1:37, like I said, because it's a real pretty part. Other than that, it rocked!
^.~
Yeah, as we said on the comments, its not mastered yet, its only the demo ; )
Ha!
I'm writing this before the song even finishes.
The beat is freaking beastly, and the melody is dark and just...
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IT'S GREAT!
Quote: "an the melody is dark an just..."
very true.
as so true i was watching bloody movies an horror pictures
when i was making it lol.
Glad you liked it.
But the synth tears, sheeesss! lol.
At 1:06 is the break down an not an average one.
it shows all the cymbals an the kick lol.
Fav. part 1:06
Ok!
The elements of this song aren't bad I don't think. The beginning melody I think is unique and awesome but...
At the end...everything just clashed into a big ball of...=/.
I think what made it so ineffective was all the resonance on the pads at the end.
Like if you found like maybe a synth or a bass that was less 'echoey' and more 'solid', it wouldn't have sounded so overlapped at the end.
It's not a bad song by no means, so STFU with that 'I'm done' B.S. Your going to have good days and bad days..just use it as fuel to better yourself.
^.~
Wow...
I'm VERY impressed with your music. You probably don't care whether I am or not but...
There aren't many people on newgrounds that I can say that to.
The beat sounded fine to me, especially at the end.
I do agree with him in the flow sensation. Having a beat that seems to sync with it more will have a more chill effect. But that's only if you want that effect.
Don't change it if THIS was the effect you were aiming for.
^.~
Overall, very good beat, and keep up the good work.
Of course I care if you like my music, that's why I share it on NG!
Thanks for the feedback, always good to hear
Hey man!
The first half the song, the beat is real good, but the melody is very empty.
I almost lost full interest in the song until the main melody came in, but not many people stick around and wait for that long to hear the main part of the song. Trust me I know, I have a tendency to do it too.
To be honest, that isyour only problem. The melody is empty. The main melody has more presence than the first, but there could still be more though. I know alot of songs who don't have alot of "tools" to make up their melodies, but theirs doesn't sound as empty as yours does. But then again, I'm a big melody fanatic so it could just be me.
Overall, a good song to build off of!
^.~
Your beat is awesome.
This is...
Very good. It sounds midi'ish. Is it supposed to? XP
I understand the no drums or bass thing. Usually taking those two elements out gives a song a more...heart felt feel, like this song. ^.^
Keep up the good work!
^.~
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