Hm..
The pianos sound very congested and ran together.
I was surprised this ran on for more than 5 minutes..lol
The part you added at about 2:40 was pretty sweet. I liked the overall chill vibe that it gave. But even so, the song was still a bit repetitive.
Not bad though. You had good ideas in mind.
Sweet.
After hearing the bells, what you brought in kind of surprised me. I wasn't expecting it at all.
Loved the sound at around 01:09.
I liked this song all around though. Very cute. :3
Nice work!
Thanks for the review.
Interesting..
Has a feeling that's spooky and tranquil at the same time.
When the synth was fading in at around 00:35, at times it sounded very odd. Kind of like it would fade in then fade out slightly at the same time.
Anyway, I liked what I heard at 00:58, when you brought everything out. The song sounded much better.
The synth you brought in at about 1:24 I thought took away from the overall feel of the song. I don't know if it was because of the synth you used or to me the rhythm just didn't fit the feel that the song was giving me at the moment but anyway..
Nice song man!
Why thank you for the review. Glad you liked the song. Next one will be epic.
Um..
How can we sing along without the lyrics?!
XD
Very heart felt. I'm sure your girlfriend was impressed to the brink of tears.
Sweet!
My only complain it is at around 00:23, some of the riffs are off beat. :/
Other than that..
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Nice.
I liked the rhythm and everything, but me personally, I have a certain distaste for slayer, but that's not going to affect my score for you, lol.
You did a really good job with this, I wish you would have extended it a bit more.
Great job though!
Yeah I'm dreaming of larger songs but I'm using FL Studio 8 demo version so I can't save anything, I can only remember very well :P
Thanks for the review!
Nice..Sweet pianos. =D
It's cool to hear you make music with a different feel to it.
I'm so used to your oriental-based style.
Even so, you did really good with this.
glad you liked it =). Yeah, it was nice doing something different.
Those strings..
Omg..
I love them!
I've been trying to find some good instrumental sounds, but most of the free ones suck.. :s
But this is great though. I can tell you put a lot of time into this.
Did you play the piano? You have many piano melodies in your songs (which own btw) and I've always wondered if you did.
But great job with this.
I know I'm late and all, but I hope you did good on the contest.
Keep doing what you're doing, because you're good at it.
Thanks for the review again. I did play the piano and, although it can take some time for me to practice, I try to play each part live and fix the major mistakes. I think it can give the piece more feeling. I'm not as good as I'd like to be, but that's where the practice comes in.
I appreciate you noticing the effort put into this. It feels good to be recognized for that. My song placed 7th in the contest, out of about 40 or 50, so it did pretty well. First time I've been up that far in any of the MACs. If you liked this one, you may want to check out my new MAC entry, First in Flight. It's for the October MAC, Flight in Freedom that was based off of a picture.
Anyways, thanks for the comments and motivation, I really appreciate it. I'll check out some of your more recent songs when I get the time. Thanks again!
~SinJim
My problem?
It's too short.
This is beautiful. Did you write it out?
I would so love for you to add on to this.. Add like some orchestra strings or something.
It makes me think of kingdom hearts.
Really good.
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