Well...
The intro kept me hooked for quite a while, that's for sure...
At around 00:52, the sound (I don't know what it is) sounds off slightly...(Don't mind me, I'm just real picky about things being off beat, even slightly. If I hear it in one of my songs, I usually go back and change it if I can)
But overall...this is a great song man, really good. You do an exceptional job with the guitar and piano.
^.~