Sweet...
I love the piano progressions in this song.
Keep up the good work, this is great!
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Sweet...
I love the piano progressions in this song.
Keep up the good work, this is great!
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Thanks, I am glad you like it^_^
Soft and sweet...
The chord changes are great.
I can never make mine come out right...
I guess I think too hard :D.
Keep up the good work!
*sheds tear*
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Nice..
I love the overall tone of this song.
Keep up the good work!
Not bad...
I think the synth you chose to use in the beginning doesn't really coinside with the pads all too well...
Sounds real good in the middle with the different synths...
This whole song just sounds like a buildup to the real thing, even near the end.
Keep working at it, it's good!
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Actually i made the Pads myself because i coulden't find anything matching.
Nice!
And...
That's about it! :D
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Dood...
Ha, Catchy!
The voices worked well with this man!
Keep up the good work yo!
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u think?:P I think it's kinda of tempo ? :S Well thanks :D
Nice...
A song for a game, definitely...
But to me it sounds too up beat to be a cave song...
I could see it as a racing song for chocobos on a FF game or something...That's just me though.
Great job!
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It's good yet...
A lot more could be done to fix it up a bit.
The chick is off-beat, I'm pretty sure you know.
The beat is good, but it becomes a bit repetitive.
All I would say is add variety and try to make sure she is on-beat more.
I'm sure they'll take off mad points for her sounding like that.
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Not bad...
I think the first one is better though.
XP
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haha thanks, me too XD
=/...
I love where this is going but...
This is pretty off-key, especially in the beginning.
The beat at around 00:36 is really loud.
This is good though.
Ideas hmm...
Keep the beat at the end...and I dunno...make a uh 'rougher' version of the melody in the beginning...eh...
I'm not real good with typing ideas, at least for music.
This sounds like it will be real good. PM me when this is done...please :D
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hey thanks for the review!
its not off key...its just the scale i use (i forget the one I use in the beginning, but I use the harmonic minor and switch keys a couple times). theres naturally accidentals on purpose to build tension. all in all, tasteful dissonance. ^_^
you're very right about the beat. the drums need to be placed in the background and quieter...this isnt mixed yet.
i'll PM you, but dont expect it to get finished. Thanks for the suggestions, interest, and detailed review! ^___^
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