Your trademark...
Eerie sounding.
I love how you can pull it off everytime...
Succesfully that is XD.
Your trademark...
Eerie sounding.
I love how you can pull it off everytime...
Succesfully that is XD.
Nice...
I love the sound near the end...
It gives the song a kind of lurking presence behind it.
Good job, in other words.
Nice...
Sounds like a buildup man.
If you ever finish, PM me. I would love to hear it.
You sung this?
Not bad.
You were a bit off beat.
It wasn't bad man.
Keep it up!
Another suggestion would be to change up the melody...
I mean, still let it revolve around the original but...
Have like an awesome instrumental break.
haha thanks for the advice, i didnt notice how off most of it was until today actually, i sang along with the song, then spliced and moved around the parts in fl, which is where I messed up the timing
i was actually going to make it go into a dnb breakdown at the end, with a bit more singing halfway through, but im awful at making dnb, so i just submitted it
thanks
It's different...
When I first heard it, I thought it was going to be another cheesy happy techno song.
I'm very impressed with the overall outcome.
Especially how the piano gives it a soft feel...
Good job man.
Nice man..
This is a good DnB mix.
Keep it up man!
Cool! Thanks!
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The voices..
Are a nice touch!
This is good!
It sounds a bit random, not much, just rarely.
Good work this though man!
Keep up the good work.
Another...
masterpiece...
What is this garageband thing?
This sounds so freaking awesome man.
Garageband is for mac only lol. You can throw some loops together electronically produe notes add your own insturments or add effects like "Live Rock Show" "Underwater Beat" stuff like that. Really powerfull tool but kinda expensive.
Ok...
Did you play sax? Piano? Bass?
Was the played live?
On a program?
Just...Wow man.
I love jazz, and this is really good XD.
I play t-bone (not in this one, as you can tell. Just composed by me). It was recorded using real instruments and real musicians using Garageband. Hope that answers it all!
-Sentinel94
Hmm...
I'm a piano fanatic...
I think at around 1:53, a piano melody would fit in nicely.
I would also change the synth and the bells? around a bit in the song.
Mess around and make a new melody that still coincides with the original one.
Otherwise, I think this is a pretty good song!
^.~
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