Your trademark...
Eerie sounding.
I love how you can pull it off everytime...
Succesfully that is XD.
Your trademark...
Eerie sounding.
I love how you can pull it off everytime...
Succesfully that is XD.
Nice...
I love the sound near the end...
It gives the song a kind of lurking presence behind it.
Good job, in other words.
Nice...
Sounds like a buildup man.
If you ever finish, PM me. I would love to hear it.
You sung this?
Not bad.
You were a bit off beat.
It wasn't bad man.
Keep it up!
Another suggestion would be to change up the melody...
I mean, still let it revolve around the original but...
Have like an awesome instrumental break.
haha thanks for the advice, i didnt notice how off most of it was until today actually, i sang along with the song, then spliced and moved around the parts in fl, which is where I messed up the timing
i was actually going to make it go into a dnb breakdown at the end, with a bit more singing halfway through, but im awful at making dnb, so i just submitted it
thanks
It's different...
When I first heard it, I thought it was going to be another cheesy happy techno song.
I'm very impressed with the overall outcome.
Especially how the piano gives it a soft feel...
Good job man.
Nice man..
This is a good DnB mix.
Keep it up man!
Cool! Thanks!
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The voices..
Are a nice touch!
This is good!
It sounds a bit random, not much, just rarely.
Good work this though man!
Keep up the good work.
Hmm...
I'm a piano fanatic...
I think at around 1:53, a piano melody would fit in nicely.
I would also change the synth and the bells? around a bit in the song.
Mess around and make a new melody that still coincides with the original one.
Otherwise, I think this is a pretty good song!
^.~
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