Not bad...
I think the first one is better though.
XP
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Not bad...
I think the first one is better though.
XP
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haha thanks, me too XD
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I love where this is going but...
This is pretty off-key, especially in the beginning.
The beat at around 00:36 is really loud.
This is good though.
Ideas hmm...
Keep the beat at the end...and I dunno...make a uh 'rougher' version of the melody in the beginning...eh...
I'm not real good with typing ideas, at least for music.
This sounds like it will be real good. PM me when this is done...please :D
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hey thanks for the review!
its not off key...its just the scale i use (i forget the one I use in the beginning, but I use the harmonic minor and switch keys a couple times). theres naturally accidentals on purpose to build tension. all in all, tasteful dissonance. ^_^
you're very right about the beat. the drums need to be placed in the background and quieter...this isnt mixed yet.
i'll PM you, but dont expect it to get finished. Thanks for the suggestions, interest, and detailed review! ^___^
Nice...
The beat needs more variety.
It was good, but after a while, the same ol' n-ss n-ss became old.
Also, near the middle, it didn't sound bad, but it sounded a bit awkard since you were throwing in different samples.
Didn't quite flow, in my opinion.
It's good though.
The beginning is the best part! ^.^
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Thansk for the review i shall make better tunes thanks
Lol...
I'll be gentle :3
I love the xylophones in this.
It gives me an eerie feeling...at least until the drums come in.
The drums sound distorted, and off at certain points.
The only real problem I would say would be the beat, and the distortedness of the song...if that's a word =D.
Good job though!
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Thanks for your review!
The beat is how it should be, it's called breakcore, you should try it if you like this :)
And I did the distortion on purpose too, for a little brutal effect to the clean tones of the Xylophone.
Greets.
Everything...
...is too loud.
Especially the snare.
Ease up on the volume is my opinion.
It's different, I like it!
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ok, thanks for that.
Nice...
A nice catchy tune in 20 minutes!
Keep up the good work man!
If you want a title I'll give you one...
Racing Impulses
Keep up the good work!
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nice title
i will edit it tomorrow to put down a title i chose.
p.s. hmm same as below :P aa well both review's where good :D
This sounds like...
...the beginning of a chase scene.
FINISH THIS! I COMMAND THEE!
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its a loop, so i dont think it will be longer :P
but maybe sometime i can make a whole song using this one but i dont think so,
i cant finish a whole song, my weapon is the loop :D
The synth..
Is sick...
You better finish this!!
I wasn't able to listen to the whole thing because my computer is lagging at the moment and it's loading pretty slow and I want to review other songs so...*breaths*
Good job lol!
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thanks for the review man!
This is good!
Did you ever use it in your school project?
How'd your class like it?
:D
Yeah I did but I don't think they realized I actually made it. -.-'
Yeah you should...
This is awkward, but I like it.
Only thing I could complain about are the strings, pads or whatever kind of being overbearing...
But otherwise, this is a pretty good song!
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Thanks! I wish I could share your optimism, I only enjoy the first half of the song. Because the sustain on the lead is so long, I have dozens of notes overlapping and clustering in each other and composing is very difficult. In addition, the tone of the lead is dissimilar to conventional theory so that does not ease my burden.
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