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This is a really chill groove.
It's set back is that fact that not everything is on beat with one another.
It seems as if some things are coming in too early and is throwing the song off a bit.
But this is a nice beat.
Author's Response:
Thanks... I have to work on that.
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..won't be as informative as DjDekail, mainly because I seem to be suffereing from the same thing you do.
You're not a bad musician by any means, all of your melodies flow together very well and listening i can understand that musically, you KNOW what you're doing.
It's eq'ing, mastering, and a lack of understanding of the genre that sets you behind. And even so, you're not bad, but not potentially your best.
Because I'm the same way.
But just to rebute your quote.
Author's Response:
ok done deal...before making my next song...ill stude the make up of a true techno song... thanks for the advice. Ill look foward to hearing from you again XD
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The strings?
Man..
I honestly don't have much to say.
..
Favorites.
Actually..
Your incorporation of classical/sfx/and drums is simply..
I mean, I know you were bored but this is amazing.
asvborinmrn
I was listening intently and I said..
"Gah, another uneventful, easily placed classical song"
and..
>.>
I didn't get that.
The chord in the low brass? (I love chords like that. Where one main part stands still as the bottom or the middle chord holder progress downward)
And then the violins came in.. OMG, orchestration?!
..
Favorites.
Author's Response:
hey dude, well thanks a lot for this review ;) im glad u like my song ^_^
greets, GMC
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More than anything it sounds like background music for a video game. :D
It's good, my only problem would have to be that there is no varying in the melody.
But besides that, this is sweet.
And quite catchy. :3
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot, dude! I have been trying to make my new stuff a little better. I guess I'm gettin' there :D
And ya, variation is like my biggest enemy XD But I shall work on it.
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Dude, this is awesome.
Th opening synth's melody is.. <33
I love the bouncy edge to it and near the end you threw in the higher echo synth, which was real nice.
I seriously liked this.
4 hours well spent I'd have to say! :)
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This would be sick if you could get some real guitar in there.
And I understand where you're coming from.
I LOVE metal but craving for a nice slick hip hop beat is etched in my being.
This isn't bad, the guitar is a bit raspy and staticy.
But I get the gist of it.
Author's Response:
that is real guitar...O_O wow...(awkward)
but yea it needs work..and work shall be done...thanks for teh review!
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The arpeggiated synth in the back gave me an eargasm.
I'm serious.
I've got crap oozing out my ears man.
The bass is soft and sweet and in its simplicity it works perfectly.
The piano was a nice touch. You gave it an amazing introduction. But the introduction was varied and melodic then the main part of it was simple and repetitive! NOOO!! >.<
And the pad was cool, I didn't really like how it came in like a half beat late, but it still worked nonetheless.
The simple kick worked but it would have given it a bit more depth had you added more drums to it.
I really like this song overall. Good job!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I did notice the pad is a bit odd in it's doings, but I am not worrying about it now. As far as drums, that will be assessed later. Right now, this will do for a WIP. I just made this all today from boredom. The repetition is purely because the main composition is going to actually be put to some good work, I would rather take my time than spew out something horrid. Thanks a ton for your review. These reviews are great. I know they are hard work, but they are beneficial. So I am taking in account all you have said and will put it towards improvement. Thanks a ton.
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Me personally, I'm not a fan of this kind of trance.
The beginning was.. <3333.. nice and smooth build up with jaw dropping chords.
I heard the bass and was like.. OH YEAH.
And when the synth came in, followed by the quick snare I knew what was about to come.
But I'm not going to bash. This song is good!
It's going to be really good.
I'd love to hear the finished product.
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<333
Gorgeous.
It sends out this sinister (maybe not sinister but darkly sensual) vibe that I'm seriously loving.
I was hoping their would have been a bit more melody but this is fine as is.
I could bob my head on end to this.
Niceness.
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first I'd have to say that your piano has inspired me to make a song. :))
Second, this has the makings of an awesome composition.
My biggest thing would have to be the bass. At certain parts it seems to fall off beat a tad. And sometimes sounds a little out of it. But it matches up really well. :)
Oh man.
I really like this.
favorites pl0x.
Author's Response:
thanks! and yeah, i agree with the bass, im not sure why it does that though... ill have to go back and give it a look over once more...
i just wish i had knew more about music, haha.
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